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People see,

Judge instantly.

The childless woman

Heartbroken stripper

Moneyminded suit

And the uneducated peon.

People hear,

Judge immediately.

The runaway bride

Divorced couple

Wounded teenager

And the unfortunate atheist.

People see, hear

And voice their judgement spontaneously

Oblivious to the storm in every seed.

Reviews

[norafb]

Love it ! It's a really good message in this poem and it needs to be spread more!

[Moochi]

Thanks yeah :) Appreciate it.

[WhiteCanarie]

This has a lot of thought put behind it and I love the philosophy behind it. The only thing I would tweek about it is when you write "Judge instantly/immediately" put a "they" before it, so that it reads "They judge instantly/immediately". That would give the beginning of each stanza more flow, which will tie the whole piece together beautifully.

[Moochi]

Thank you so much... I ll definitely keep your tip in mind.