ROAR OCEAN ROAR

ROAR OCEAN ROAR

A Poem by Rose of many colours
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a sad Middle

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I climb miles and miles of a thousand hills.
Each step of the way- a moment I stand still.
And look back to glimpse my will.
Hope of an olive skin woman among so many ills.

This truth feel like ashes,
None shall see soul stained lashes.
And when the sea trashes-
Who will run to gather life's pieces.

Too late into the night,
Blasting emptiness creep in sight.
Left with unlit candles- no light.
Roar ocean roar with might.

© 2014 Rose of many colours


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Very nice write. This is a well written piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing description took me with you. I had night climbs near the sea. The ocean was a sort of peace. Good to watch the sea dance and the ocean roar. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. I do share some of the things you have experience as well . I saw them in your wri.. read more
I appreciate your form and the effect it has on your delivery. You made the concept easy to grasp, even in such graceful depth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I truly appreciate your presence over my write
"I climb miles and miles of a thousand hills.
Each step of the way- a moment I stood(stand) still.
And look back to glimpse my will.
Hope of an olive skin woman among so many ills.

This truth feel like ashes,
None shall see soul stained lashes,
and when the sea trashes-
Who will run to gather life's pieces.

To(too) late into the night,
Blasting emptiness creep in sight.
Left with unlit candles- no light.
Roar ocean roar with might,"

I felt the narrators adventurous spirit of climbing, glimpsing into the unknown, listening to the roaring of the ocean waves vs. the silence of the soul, lightening up a burning candle after another in the night for the hope to come...A marvelous write...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the clear understanding and for the corrections .
Your senses are very sharp. Bless.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome muchly...God bless...:)................

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Added on March 22, 2014
Last Updated on June 23, 2014
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Rose of many colours
Rose of many colours

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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Hello. I'm from the Caribbean,Trinidad and Tobago. Writing is my companion, it defines the person i am. 'My tongue is the pen of a ready writer' this is my favourite verse in the Bible. My expe.. more..

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