i am no poet.

i am no poet. i am no writer.

I am an aspiring intellectual 

But not in the "educational" sense.

I just want to find a way to

Express these thoughts that

Slip through the moments are memories

so do they really exist?

Are my insights just grasps for straws

To explain the logical

Pain from memories

that don't exist?

Or do they design new rules

becoming predisposed tools to advance 

because we don't always have to get the short stick

Reviews

[Niall Madden]

I feel there is a conflict between the idea behind the lines. The start sets it off as the idea that is poetry about intellect or creativity, it the develops into the idea that human nature always questions things we cannot grasp. However language was good it had a nice flow and I enjoyed it "so do they really exist" we shall never know...