90 yards.

90 yards.

A Poem by MoriartyMesa
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In 1995, yours truly did something totally insane against a team way better than his own.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-tJYN-eG1zk&feature=colike





And the kick off

RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

looks like the 76 is going for it.


DIVE,

and he has the ball, can he make the 90 yr run against the Bulls?


JUMP,

A LINE MEN WITH THE BALL?!?!?!?!??!?!


HURL,

And the Bulls are right on the Falcons nest


SCRAMBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Falcons just knocked back the Bulls Line!!!!


RUN,
It looks like three linemen are heading right to him, this bird of prey may have had his wings clipped!
SMASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THEY ARE DOWN, ALL THREE DOWN!?!?!?!?!?!?!

JUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Inside linebacker coming!!!!
RUN,
The Falcon Line has come in!!!!!
SCRAMBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
98 makes an impressive leap frog tackle!!

DUCK,
98 IS DOWN!!!!!WAIT 73 is coming in!!!!!
TURN,
RIGHT INTO THE BULLS CHEERLEADERS, OH MY GOD!!!!!
TWIST,
I think one of them is hurt Jim, wait 67 is gonna come into get 76

SPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
35 yard, wait Jim Look
LINE-BACKERS!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ioIylqRPXU

LOOK AT THAT HEAD ON ATTACK
MOVE! MOVE! MOVE!
61 JUST FEEL TO THE GROUND, BUT THEIR ARE TWO LEFT!

SCRAMBLE TO THE LEFT!!!

LEFT

LEFT

LEFT


RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

44

DOWN OUT!!!!

56

BROKEN...OUT!!!!


29
GRIP
76
SHAKE
29
HOLD
76
SHAKE
29
TIGHTEN
76
76 SMASH!!!!!!!!!!!



90 YARD PUNT RETURN

BACK IN FALCONS TALONS.





© 2012 MoriartyMesa


Author's Note

MoriartyMesa
One of the only true things I ever plan to share here,


rip it apart as you see fit.

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Nice writing.. Keep it up. Do u read mine 2 WHY and WHO IS A POET,

Regards,
Lucky

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is too much testosterone in this piece! lol
I feel the intensity of the game as you have vehemently described it! Very creative!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I, for one, am glad you did! This was cool...er, rad, um, heh, BAD A*S! Well, you get the idea...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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AK
Nice piece! I loved your description of the game haha I could feel it too and ducked my head twice:)
Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Eve
Very exciting write, I had to fight the urge to duck and weave in my chair, now I have to cheek-ally (is that not a word? oh damn) admit I substituted my fav Emmitt!
sure miss him...anyway I enjoyed it, i felt as if I was making the drive myself!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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EMF
Ah... This is that colonial game. Rugby in body armour. Being Enlglish I shouldn't really like it, let alone undestand it. Yet damn it I just got caught up in it. Still no idea who won, but I bloody loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know this woman, vereeeee intelligent, studied English at Oxford University, vereeeee clever. She loves theatre this woman does. Writes reviews she does. Loves drama. And yet... She hates sport, just loathes it. Now I think there is something wrong with her world view. Why? Because were -- short of war -- can a man or a woman find greater human drama than on the sporting field. I mean just look at all those beautiful verbs in your recollection - RUN/DIVE/JUMP/HURL/SMASH. THAT! is drama. Great write mate! DRAMATIC! Exciting.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2012
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