If Only I Would Learn To Listen

A Rondelet for PoeticPiers "Introducing The Rondolet" challenge

 

 

 

It calls to me,

 

This, my kiss, of luminous light.

 

It calls to me,

 

This, my wish, by day unto night

 

Beckoning me, enticingly,

 

It sings to my soul.  Soul, be free

 

It calls to me.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Wow, the picture you posted with this lovely little rondelet is fascinating, Jeri! I could certainly identify the feeling of "free" with the water pouring down. (If you can't post your poem to the challenge, you may not have it "labeled" correctly. I contacted the site owner about a similar problem and had to mark "poem" in both categories in order to access it for the challenge.) :-) Sharon

[Helena]

Wonderful, simply wonderful my dear friend. Excellently written, could not
fault one thing about it. You have composed a simply beautiful Rondelet
Graphic suited your poem perfectly too!

Hugs
Helena

[Nassira]

Very beautiful. Nice one for the "rondelet" poetry contest.
Salam (peace) to you

[imm's place]

very beautifuland full of emotions, mary