Black Velvet

Black Velvet

A Poem by Diana Lynn
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Submission for contest.

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We locked eyes as we each had a taste

You flashed a smile while my heart raced

F**k it, come place your hands on my waist  

© 2013 Diana Lynn


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I truly love this poem. short and says it like it is.
Everyone in life has had one of these moments and there is no other way to put it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That last line has me grinning, Diana. When the drinks go down just right and the lights are low, some kind of faux magic grabs hold. I like this piece. Angi~

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana Lynn

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
I like this. It's short, simple, and bursting with desire. Powerful words and it made me smile!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana Lynn

7 Years Ago

Thank you. This one took me the most time out of the 3 I submitted.

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Added on November 4, 2013
Last Updated on November 4, 2013
Tags: drunken, cocktail, bar, hook up