Seasons

Falling farther away from

who you are

Who you were

Who you might one day be

Falling faster through the air

Without a care

That your falling farther away

From you and me

My gift to you is my everything

Who i am

Who i was

Who i could grow to be

Your gift to me is this

That in that moment of embrace

You know the true value

Of a kiss

Let me catch you

Let me show you

Let me Help you to see

That it might seem strange

Even in the cool season of change

That love can set us free

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

This is a very beautiful, and well composed piece of work! Great write.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I have read 20 plus poems today. Best one today! You are my new AMERICAN POETRY IDOL. I love this piece that you created. Scartch hollywood just give you the title now.

[Love Struck]

This has a sort of melancholy note to it; sad, but free. It reminds me of the lyrics of something from the All-American Rejects...The ending, 'Even in the cool season of change That love can set us free,' is a lovely ending. (: Thumbs up!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

BEAUTIFUL! what a nice poem,

Let me catch you
Let me show you
Let me Help you to see
That it might seem strange
Even in the cool season of change
That love can set us free

it could almost be a song, it flows so nicely. thanks for sharing this!

Kena

[justjenn_2u]

Sometimes falling away from who we are is blessing in disguise. Putting away the old, bringing in the new. Letting love lead the course is a dream to some. To others, a fear.

This poem is a wonderful reflection and forecast of what has been, what could be.

In a cold season, where you contemplate the winter of your soul, may you find love.

[enuf]

how nice good words

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely romantic poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah