The Burning Sun

The Burning Sun

A Poem by MrBeardM
"

One more day, to live.

"
And I sit, the blazing sun
Burning all of me
I hide in pain, nowhere to run
I am now, not free.
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And above, above them all
Only when it's night,
I see those burning, in the sky
Millions, they're so bright.
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And I sit, and ask the moon
Why can I now rest?
It sits there and very soon
It is heading west.
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And the burning doesn't stop
Day and after day,
And when eventually I drop
South will be my way.
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And when the burning of the flames
What would I not give
To look up, the blazing sun
Just one more day, to live.

© 2024 MrBeardM


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I'm not sure if this is about anything specific, but when I read this it makes me think about burnout, exhaustion, and depression.

But that's just my interpretation of it and I would love to know what it's based on!
(you're an EXTRAORDINARY poet)

Posted 1 Week Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MrBeardM

1 Week Ago

I just write to calm my mind :)
It's not really based on anything, but only on the idea of no.. read more

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Added on May 4, 2024
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MrBeardM
MrBeardM

Baia Mare, Maramures, Romania



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