The Hooks:

The Hooks: tender and
    Daring ,
        little Darlings !
Sweating droplets of
    Viscous -
    overthecounter
    monastic
    musings.
Where cenobites rain
    in Couplets -
    Absurd pantomimes in
    lingering
    Savage
    White
    cassocks.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I wonderful beginning to a much longer poem …. me thinks. The reader is definitely left wanting to more. Part two, perhaps.

[Mr.Boffin]

After rereading it I think your right! an imagine popped into my head and I already have a few lines....ill let you know when its done :P thanks :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I really enjoyed this piece. There is an underlying sinister feel to its seemingly flippant style.