WONDERS of the Clear Eye

This is a freestyle writing I created last minute for this poetry slam event i attended.

Ever wondered what life would be like if your vision was clear. Crystal clear like objects in mirrors may appear. Makes it easier to see things coming near from afar. You know when you get high and have to use some clear eye. Or bring in a queer guy so the straight guy can see the same things from the other gentleman’s eyes. Laying in the grass, looking at the midnight skies. Wishing you could see right through the stars, the same way they see right through your eyes. Wishing you could see things the same way your dog looks at you knowing you are in despair. Wishing he could speak to you so you know that there is someone there. Our visions are so distorted we are just SEEING things and not actually LOOKING. If I am wrong, correct me. Pass me some eye drops or better yet give me your EYES.

Reviews

[Alice Maria]

Wow. This was a very powerful read.

[DopeSmiles]

Thank you. What did you get from it?

[B]

Oddly enough i go through this each and every single day of my life
quite literally

Really well done

[DopeSmiles]

Your'e not alone. Thank you.