Whispers In The NightA Poem by JasonCrys for help that can neither be heard nor |
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Maybe they don't see your pain because you have your blinds and curtains closed? Be open with people and they will be open with you. This piece spoke to me... so some window must be open... Yep, REgardless beautiful write. The last lines were so eye-catching. It really makes you think
Posted 15 Years Ago |
the part that sais "no one seems to see my pain so the windows to my soul must be unclean" makes me think that when someone is hurting so bad and no one pays attention it distorts the view from the inside and outside of the window. thats why its better to not have people peeping around till you get your windows thoroughly washed:)
Posted 15 Years Ago |
Very profound and simple. I read the depth and it's understood without being too simple. Good write.....
Posted 15 Years Ago |
You are so deep!
This great it says to me that you are in search of a better you, and that you need help to do it. Nice write. Posted 15 Years Ago |
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5 Reviews
Added on February 11, 2009
Last Updated on February 17, 2009
5 Reviews
Added on February 11, 2009
Last Updated on February 17, 2009
Author
Jason
Philadelphia, PA
About
Im 25 from the 2.ONE.5 (Philadelphia). One of the many shades of "black" comprise the color of my skin. No kids No woman, just really good friends. Ok the top part of my Bio was when I didn't think.. more..Writing
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