Past Shades, Future Lies

I've burned my tomorrows, beyond thy passing days. Awakened to a new life, madness yet raves my brain.. Shuttering eyes remind me of a past I once knew, searching for a future of todays made up of you. Hearing the leaves of yesterday as whispers of the wind, perceived shadows reign upon thy chilling skin.

Author's Note

Please share your thoughts and feelings.

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Lovely poem...enjoyed reading...nicely penned...Rose

[Hayley]

Sounds like really chill, sort of instrumental song lyrics.

[char]

My past is full of so much things...most are painful. But today, I stare into the future, hoping it will be just as good as today. And alone in my own solitude, whenever I allow myself to think, I just remember...the past will always be there. It won't ever go away. I can relate to this poem. Good.

[Meliss@k]

very descriptive... and for some reason mysterious as this talks of your past and future.

good write

[Liz]

This has gotta be my favorite of yours so far. Something about it just gets to me.

[ganga ramesh]

deep, soothening and unforgettable.....absolutely marvelous!!! pas vrai!!!

[Justin]

Glad to hear you liked it, and thank you for the kind words.

[ganga ramesh]

always welcome :)

[Justin]

Very deep writing how I adore it... you are such in an awareness lately...
This is amazing and dwells on it's own flow, just to be noticed.... wonderful piece.

- Elisa

[Justin]

Many thanks upon such kind words :)

You're very welcome :) I enjoyed it, so I came here to leave my words :)