Friend In You

"Friend In You"

When I was alone you were there, when I was low you showed you cared/

Whether on the phone or in person, you helped a lost person to reappear

You seem to lessen every fear, and seemed so near, when I was far/

And now I'm here, I'm so sincere when I say you're a big part of my heart

From the start you were a star, that shined so bright in my blackened sky/

And made me happy when I wasn't, and when I was you made me smile

You loved the style in which I rapped, a couple years before the ban/

So I always love to get some feedback, from my number one fan

I found a friend in you and I'm thankful, for the friendship that we have/

That's why I'm penning you this poem, to give you some of this love back

Remember that rap I rapped & recorded for you, back in December, 07/

I was so nervous to play it to ya, but you loved it when you listened

We went from pictures & messages, to lyrics, phone calls & (censored)/

And that itself got its own poem, though the title I won't mention ;)

You're such a beautiful person, a woman whom I have nothing but love/

So I'm sending you this dedication, to thank you for all of the above. 

 

Copyright 2014 The Elusive Mr Dunne (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[John Carver]

Even a dog sniffs the feceses rather than the roses. This is hard to believe like the little boy thrown in the sludge pond by Satan stays there until he is grown singing songs to anyone that will listen about the stench but he falls in love with a little bonde girl in the pond and there seems to be love between the two as they cry together. "But it stinks!!!"

[M. J. Smith]

I hope she liked it. A beautiful poem of tribute. Well written.

[Jaan]

Hey, I tried to read and sing it, it mostly worked for me. I could feel the rhythm and the feeling, you did a good job especially in expressing yourself. Nice!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend. We need kind people. We need people to make us feel. We are never alone. Powerful and good words shared. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Since I guess you were scolded for your rap music, now you have an outlet, not only to sing to, but to love and share your music with,
Very romantic and touching.
Best
B.
PS I would like you to reach out to read some of my poems, please do not send read requests, I have so many to read! Thank you