Incomplete Puzzle Set

I wrote the chorus for my god brother to sing and i heard it was blown away....even i can sing it. in the process of finishing it's recording. got my brother kongo to rap on this on to.

Chorus Written by Andre Franklin (Ghost Skittles)

 

A lot of us kid and play 

How many of us know what's love today

All of us need it,others don't believe it

Due to the lies and being mistreated 

To many lies not enough truth

When I'm all alone all fingers point to you

Was it something i did or something i said?

Playing dum like a puppet

Just doing what you want,screw who your with

No one's perfect

I'm not either

Just another Imcomplete puzzle set

 

Verse 1  written by Andre Franklin (Ghost Skittles) 

 

Love at first sight 

Isn't what it's crack up to be

That's what I told myself until to happen to me

Thinking so hard you'd thought i'd had an epiphany

So interested in you like they were wolf gang symphonies

In my eyes you're perfect forget the line of symmetry

But you're heart shape was solely based in geometry

Things fell into place so naturally

Guess you can call it chemistry

Better yet it's a mystery

Of the ages as I hesitate to turn the pages 

Crushing on you has my mind running in mazes

Ever since i met you my life is switching paces

M.I.A now on a regular basics

 

Chorus

 

A lot of us kid and play 

How many of us know what's love today

All of us need it,others don't believe it

Due to the lies and being mistreated 

To many lies not enough truth

When I'm all alone all fingers point to you

Was it something i did or something i said?

Playing dum like a puppet

Just doing what you want,screw who your with

No one's perfect

I'm not either

Just another Imcomplete puzzle set

 

Verse 2 written by Lawerence Robinson (Kongo)

 

Walking in the darkness

Walking in my mind

She looks me in my eyes

And she wonders why?

I look her in the eyes

And see the pain and sorrow

My heart is broken

And she's hoping for tomorrow

She fades into the light

The heart that beats

Has now escaped my sight

The heart that was red

Now turning black and blue

My emotions is dead

And now I can't be with you

 

Chorus

 

A lot of us kid and play 

How many of us know what's love today

All of us need it,others don't believe it

Due to the lies and being mistreated 

To many lies not enough truth

When I'm all alone all fingers point to you

Was it something i did or something i said?

Playing dum like a puppet

Just doing what you want,screw who your with

No one's perfect

I'm not either

Just another Imcomplete puzzle set

 

Hook- Written by Timothy Bell

 

Can someone tell me what the anwser to questions quite like this

I've cried for countless nights just wondering if my love for you exist

How can i show i care when you always resist it

What's love? what is love?

 

Chorus

 

A lot of us kid and play 

How many of us know what's love today

All of us need it,others don't believe it

Due to the lies and being mistreated 

To many lies not enough truth

When I'm all alone all fingers point to you

Was it something i did or something i said?

Playing dum like a puppet

Just doing what you want,screw who your with

No one's perfect

I'm not either

Just another Imcomplete puzzle set

 

the instrumentals fades and the end

 

Author's Note

I'd like to thank Timothy Bell and Lawerence Robinson for help make this as great as this could be. Should have a posting on youtube soon

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

excellent write. The great thing about collaborations is that it brings out a totally different voice than any of the writers have alone.

[Jeffrey]

I completely agree with Robbie! This had an excellent flow and I look forward to checking out the youtube vid when it goes up! Very well done, Andre!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Nice! Love the wordplay and rhythmic flow... you are very talented...keep it up!
Writing songs can be difficult... I admire your gift in this. Great work!