Seasons

Seasons

A Poem by Mrs.Sophrosyne
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Do you get snow in the winter?
When you walk outside does the cold air hold your breath,
Like small clouds of your soul suspended
Frozen in time yet fading fast? 
Do your boots slide on the cement
As you walk to your car to drive further away?
Is there ice on the ground
Like the ice that has formed in my heart?
Black and sightless
Do you cuddle warm beneath the sheets 
beside a heart wholely yours
like mine never was?
Do you get snow in the winter?
I miss the seasons

© 2014 Mrs.Sophrosyne


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Mrs.Sophrosyne
Read and review; I'd greatly appreciate it. Any criticism is constructive criticism.

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I like how you tied in the ice on the ground to the ice that has formed around your heart. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mrs.Sophrosyne

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words! I am pleased you took the time to read and to review my .. read more
Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

You're welcome...

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