Love Left Me

Love Left Me

A Poem by Mrs.Sophrosyne
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Love left me
alone
He moved on
He grew up
He no longer calls
Love left me
alone
And I can't find
Some one who can fill his empty shoes
Though he's replaced me.
Love left me
alone
I'm freezing tonight
I'm cold without his arms
To hold me tight
Love left me
alone
I can't move on
Though I've grown up
But I no longer try to call
I left love 
behind
Left it shattered in my wake
Covered in the dust of my broken heart
I've grown up.

And 
Time
Moves
On

© 2010 Mrs.Sophrosyne


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Mrs.Sophrosyne
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Wow, I love your word choice it really flows through the peom. I'm not too crazy about the format though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I adore the format and the flow of words... the "love left me" is more powerful than any person leaving... when love leaves you it takes the breath out of your longues, the beat out of your heart and the life out of your eyes... this is something special.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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