Ideation

Ideation

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

Evermore let you perfuse cerebration,
to deflect me from all my endeavors.
Veil in luscious acuities of ardour,
hasten after extant evocation,
accredit all else void and frivolous.
Whither rationale bields my heart soar,
to pursue me Avalon once more,
enwrap me in keen limerence wherefore!

© 2019 Mrudula Rani


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Ok, so I hope I didn't get this wrong, but I feel like this espouses someone trying to hinder another from their dreams and aspirations like so many jealous friends or lovers do, but that the heart of the dreamer remains intact and ready to soar at a moments notice when the opportunity comes. Is that right? The vocabulary was stunning and the and the rhyming scheme was great. When I read it out loud I sounded much smarter than I am!!!...lol. Great job!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Crowley

2 Months Ago

Thank you, and I consider you one of the best and brightest as well!!! Uma grande abraco right back .. read more
Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

Muito Obrigada .
Crowley

2 Months Ago

Anytime....
I thought I had left my mark here before now... I dont know whether I just left the page without hitting the Submit Review button, or what... but anyway, here we are again regardless & what can this old geezer say other than .. you probably make your readers think more than most poets do, but there is no doubt at all in my mind that your so oft complex poems hold their value long after your readers push that blessed button.... gonna make sure I do just that now.. Top Marks again dear M :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

Thank you my dear friend, for you always have the most kindest thoughts to share. Uma abraço querid.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago

......... :) back at you..
:) .... yes ... begone ye rational mind ... just leave me with my dreams and imaginations .. good thing I have a dictionary ..you do know how to string wonderful words together Mrudula!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

Thank you dear E, you are the best, for you make any ordinary day a beautiful day. It actually sound.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

your singing now Mrudula! :)
Such an enjoyable read. I love the word play.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you, for your lovely review.
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any endeavor other than basking in her ardor ....is irrational...
the muse rules...all i need is the love of my muse...
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much. Jacob, I appreciate you reading my thoughts .
' Evermore let you perfuse cerebration, - to deflect me from all my endeavors.' Ask and you will be answered?!

Am told there's little better than escaping reality and creating dreams come true! If that makes sense, on this occasions I've managed to understand your skilfully employed language! Avalon would be crowded out if everyone followed your example.. The essential limerence is happily and firmly enwrapped! Yet another unique use of phrases..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

I loved your mesmerizing perception, dear beautiful Emmajoy. How you rebuild the poem is absolutely .. read more
i found this deep but well expressed

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you, for understanding my words.
You mrudula'ed me again started involuntarily touching my lip by the second line. stunned so stunned I could only answer in a poem....

Ethereal lips breathe
Drifts
Dancing billow mist whispers
Infer intimate midsts
Interlace


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

is that your ear?
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

No.... picture of someone else...... ( if you are curious, I am on page 13, on line writer)
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank for the lovely verses... I am thrilled to see your stellar response to my words, uma abraço.
This is quite sad in a way. The love was there, definitely torrid. But alas the wanting has gone.
Now, just to get that love back, even in memory would be great.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Saturday night, Sunday morning. Was it just a daydream.
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Depends on how you slept,ifyou slept at all....
Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Oh yeah, sleep, got to factor that in. lol
Lovely sensual wordplay in a well constructed and intensly 'erotic' short verse with impact!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you John, for your lovely understanding review.

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