Vail

Vail

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

Incrementally
base over apex teared
Ably amidst you.

Quaffing you, I brood ...
perhaps slack of attitude
timeously ensue?

Natheless can't disjoin
taction even an instant,
Can't mislay entreat.

Amongst my spirit,
Sense and soma vastly
tagatied by you.

When repine for joy....
It's you lone I intuit.


© 2019 Mrudula Rani


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Mrudula Rani
Picture; pencil sketch by Mrudula

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and as tho seen through a veil and therefore not clearly.. the scene is nigh perfect.... therefore it all is revealed.. having fallen head over heels in stages or in leaps and bounds.. supping wistfully from a lovers cup and still falling.. physically, and spiritually in love with the only one.. it just has to be writ and recorded............... N

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

What a wonderfully perfect intuition you own, querido. I just love your beautiful analysis. Thank yo.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago

well I'll be blowed.... :)



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and as tho seen through a veil and therefore not clearly.. the scene is nigh perfect.... therefore it all is revealed.. having fallen head over heels in stages or in leaps and bounds.. supping wistfully from a lovers cup and still falling.. physically, and spiritually in love with the only one.. it just has to be writ and recorded............... N

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

What a wonderfully perfect intuition you own, querido. I just love your beautiful analysis. Thank yo.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago

well I'll be blowed.... :)
I hope you were agitated in a good way my language queen!!!
no matter.. for this is truly beautiful no matter where it- is sliced:)
Love the sketch

Posted 2 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

After reading your thoughts I am on cloud nine, Robert. Uma abraço.
The picture is quite haunting.
Like the changing seasons of life.
Sadness and joy all rolled into one.
You a secret sketcher.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

2 Months Ago

Black and white drawings have that effect, charcoal ones are even better!
Paul Bell

2 Months Ago

Yeah, I quite like charcoal, does bring out the dark.

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Added on July 16, 2019
Last Updated on July 16, 2019
Tags: spirit, soma, sense, intuit, Haiku sonnet, incrementally, taction

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