Life

Life is suddle.

Life is flawless.

Well of course that's only what people say.

Besides,no one ever gets their way.

I live life to the fullest.

Or at least that's what I plan to do.

I promise to be the true me.

The real me.

That is what i plan to be.

           A poem by Ms.writer

Reviews

[*~Kristy~*]

I do too ... Sometimes that is such a hard thing to accomplish, but in your poem(if it is true), you seem very determined to be yourself... To be happy...
I set my mind to this every day, but still wind up angry and sad before the night overtakes the light... It's very confusing and frustrating.
This poem perfectly conveyed the way I feel every day, and I really liked it. It was really encouraging.
Great write!

[closed]

this is really good. i like the collective element it has going. i'll keep an eye out for your work

[Tia Sanchez]

Good poem. It's easy to write about personal things, but, then again, it can be harder, because you have to relive old memries. Nice job here.

[P.S I Love You]

I feel the same way... I loved the way you expressed your words in this poem. Nicely done.

[Ms.writer]

Thank you all for reviewing my poem. I appriciate your honesty and your judgements. My poem is indeed true. I tend to write about my life. If you enjoyed this piece of writing,you will love my next one.

Ms.writer

[Vanity]

I like how you were literate and lacked spelling/grammar errors. The idea of this poem is very overused.
I like it, it's sweet, short and different. But there are many poems on the same subject, expressing the same feelings, which will get much more attention.
I also like what you state about yourself in the poem.
Very nice.