Deadly

Deadly

A Chapter by Ms Jessica Renee
"

Oh so lethal.

"
Previous Version
This is a previous version of Deadly.



Don't be deceived

This isn't make believe

It's time to open up your eyes

And see the truth outside

 

Stop trying to conceive

Just open up and receive

It's time to accept the facts

What we have is deadly

 

Like a poison taking over

A disease growing deep

No longer able to feel heat

Your blood running free

Every breath becoming slow

Your heart no more yours

This has become deadly

 

The essence of life is gone

A sickness has come

Everything is now almost done

The last drop of blood has run

 

No more light

Don't even fight it

No more tonight

It's past our time

Far to deadly now

 

Like a poison taking over

A disease growing deep

No longer able to feel heat

Your blood running free

Every breath becoming slow

Your heart no more yours

This love has become deadly



© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
Original Lyrics - 10/22/2007



Reviews

No weakness in this poem. Strong and honest words allowing the anger to stand-out. I like the repetition of the words "This is deadly". I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

35 Views
Added on June 30, 2008


Author

Ms Jessica Renee
Ms Jessica Renee

A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



About
I'm what you call a creative and imaginative person. For as long as I can remember, I have always been exploring the vast wonders of my thoughts and using the best of my abilities to produce a one of .. more..

Writing