Empty Within

Empty Within

A Chapter by Ms Jessica Renee
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Just damn cold inside..

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Lost and wandering through
Time has seemed to stop
Coldness has come over
And a permanent darkness

The days have faded
My smile no longer around
Nothing is right anymore
The light is no more

Cause without a tender touch
A sweet caring touch
I'm nothing at all
Just empty within
With no hope in sight
Lost the strength to fight
Nothing but a lost light
I'm empty within

Life isn't comfortable
Don't even want to live
No longer do I believe
Slowly becoming incomplete
The cold running deep

Cause without a tender touch
A sweet caring touch
I'm nothing at all
Just empty within
With no hope in sight
Lost the strength to fight
Nothing but a lost light
I'm empty within

Cold and unfeeling
Unloved and unchanging
I'm empty within



© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
Original Lyrics - 10/19/2007



Featured Review

Such strength in each poem. I like the flow of the poetry. Allowing the reader to feel the heart and mind fall to pain and hurt. This poem fell into place with the emotion of love stealing the joy from a life away. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Such strength in each poem. I like the flow of the poetry. Allowing the reader to feel the heart and mind fall to pain and hurt. This poem fell into place with the emotion of love stealing the joy from a life away. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ms Jessica Renee
Ms Jessica Renee

A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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