How To Touch A Girl

Sometimes you think you know

That your emotions are shown

But sometimes that just isn't enough

All she needs is one touch

 

So tell me

Have you every held her close

Arms embracing her sweetly

With kisses trailing across

Her rosy lips softly.

 

So tell me

Have you ever told her

That she is all that you want

As you pull her to you

Showing her the feelings are true

 

So tell me

Have you hugged her tight

Whispered into her ears

As you cuddle through the night

Ignoring past fears

Because being with her feels so right

 

Tell me

Do you know

How to touch?

 

How to touch a girl.

Author's Note

Inspired by yet another song with the same title. It is just a spontaneous write and I might edit it once I get feedback.

Reviews

[WordMaster]

This was a very enjoyable read, with a clear focus and wonderful rhythm

The word selection and placement may improve the poem somewhat by making certain lines more direct�. "Ignoring past fears..."

I love the image you created in the readers' mind, challenging them to ask the question presented

Well done

[Ebs]

Awww. wonderful write Jess. Loved the description put into it:
With kisses trailing across
Her rosy lips softly.

I though it was great :)

air kisses

ebs

[Colleen C Dunphy]

this is very beautiful, and it makes me think of a song "Must be doing something right", because i want to say, Yes I know.
Thank you for sharing as always.

[Raja]

it is spontaneous and creative in the flow of words and visions. I liked the poem. The subject is simple, but it gives a new picture as if I know this first time; there is the chemistry of good work.

Thank you.

Raja.

[Jacky Bones]

hmmmm......do not eat hot pizza with the fire on
tis was good read

[lauren emily]

I think this is wonderful the way it is! Great write!