I Need You

I Need You

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
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Oh yes I do.

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I never needed alot of things

But the moment you came

Suddenly into my life

That all seem to change

 

Now I have all I want

All the reasons

To show me the truth

That I need you

 

Like water flowing

Breath becoming

This love is growing

And I know I need you

 

You're like the blood

Pumping life into me

The love is shown

I need you to breathe

 

Don't you know

You give me courage

To love again

Your love rescues me

When I feel the rain

And I can never turn back

Cause I need you

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
A romantic side seems to flourish out of me with the music that is played. Hope you enjoy. I am sure you know who this is dedicated to again. ;)

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In need of love, a person can preach and want anything. In need to attain that, a person tames the feeling that is most obvious and that is exposure in as many beautiful ways as possible. You did this. It seems universal, and it has touched the innumerable hearts like that of mine.

Good write.

Thank you

Raja


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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In need of love, a person can preach and want anything. In need to attain that, a person tames the feeling that is most obvious and that is exposure in as many beautiful ways as possible. You did this. It seems universal, and it has touched the innumerable hearts like that of mine.

Good write.

Thank you

Raja


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet free verse here, will have to look to see who you dedicate your poems too LOVE is beautiful see you in poets corners Ca

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know the feeling, I need my baby even when we are mad at eachother.
Great poem!

Orlando M

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah..I could feel the passion in this. This was good and you said so much with so little words. I like poems like this. They get to the point, and don't go over people's head.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ms Jessica Renee
Ms Jessica Renee

A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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