Hide

Invisible tears.
Cries go unheard.
Don't tell your feelings.
Don't say a word.

She'll only say you're immature.
Tell you grow-up.
Hang up the phone.
Swallow the pain,
til you're alone.

Then,
Let the tears fall on the pillow
just dont let her know.
Cry out loud, she wont hear.
Your pain falls on deaf ears.

Write a poem,
write a song.
If you tell her,
she'll only say your wrong.

Only she hurts.
Only she can feel pain.
Try to make her understand,
your efforts will be in vain.
My whole world crumbles when she cries.
But to her my tears are only drama and lies.

Become unemotional.
Close off your heart.
Don't let her know you're falling apart.

Reviews

[O.J.]

this poem is written the way all poems should be. kept simple yet you can feel emotions. i like the rhythm and the rhyme, the flow....
i just hate the feel of sadness in it.

the closing lines are strong, cuz they're not: don't let yourself fall apart - or anything like that, but "Don't let her know you're falling apart." like it's something you know that can't be changed....
keep writing
OJ

[Kristina]

I agree with October Joy, it flowed really nicely and I understood the emotion. sorry that such sadness was in it like that, but I pray that i can read the flip side of this one, about happiness. Very good writing, I can relate. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more.

[.]

I like these lines:

Write a poem,
write a song.
If you tell her,
she'll only say your wrong.

this is so true

it should be dedicated to those who are stone-hearted and do not care about our feelings

i love your poem

it is beautifully written | with a feeling of sadness and deep emotions

[DaWonAndOnli]

This Poem has great flow and I think everyone can relate to this feeling. Outstanding poem.