Falling Fire.

If all the people who do sins are punished, no one will stay alive.

Falling fire from the sky.
it's raining fire, water died.
lighting towers of goodbyes.
boiling water of all seas.


now it's killing all the beasts.
never saw them so much feared.
like they did when fire stroke.
left them in their biggest shock.



Falling water that's so old.
only fire is falling now.
normal, famous, blue, old sky.
now only colored black and red.


fire, fire kill them all.
leave the world innocent free.
when you start, start with me.
nothing left no heart is free.

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like frost asked...what would be better, fire or ice...i think maybe ice...

this is like the end of the world, but it also reminded me of how the dinosaurs became extinct.

some weather related or disaster related condition destroying everything so that we can start over.

i like the poem...

i also think starting over won't make a difference...we still will find ourselves going astray..it is human nature...but then...being human is okay i think...

jacob