The exact moment

The exact moment

A Poem by Baldwin Mupfeki

When you see nothing
When today is sorrowful
When flying is hindered
When you can't forgive
When you can’t feel comfort
When everyone has it
When you keep drowning
When you fear tomorrow
When you prefer dreams
When you can’t feel alive
When suicides flee
When God can't answer
When all has failed
When life is dead!

© 2015 Baldwin Mupfeki


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Wow. There is an exact moment for everything and everyone when things go South. I hope with a glimmer of hope, we can make it through. An excellent write, sir....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baldwin Mupfeki

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).............

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Baldwin Mupfeki
Baldwin Mupfeki

Kwekwe, Midlands, Zimbabwe



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