Why?

I think one of my new years resolution turned into a poem/lyrics...

Why did I let it go this far?

The dryness back in my throat is sickening

We all have scars we carry

but those who isn’t visible is the ugliest ones.

I keep on pretending I don’t feel

That this machine is broken and falsely

The bottomless pit in my body

I pretend I’ll still wake up tomorrow without this

Your marble and imperfect body

That still is so pure because of a perfect heart

Captured in a shaking cage

Still amaze this dysfunctional mind behind dry eyes

You’ll have your chance to shine

If you dare to jump onto a suspicious scene

Have your flaws pointed out

I might escape this nauseous feeling it gives

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

This is really intereting. So is this a poem, or a song? I must admit, the meaning behind the words is a little cryptic--I can't really figure out the big picture; but I can get hints of it on the peripheral vision of my mind's eye. If that was your intention (and that takes skill) then well done! This is really good. [It sounds like the New Years Resolution was to stop womanizing, or drinking--either one fits the words] I really like the first paragraph--we all have scars to carry, but those who isn't visible is the ugliest one. That's very true for all of us. Nice work :)