I Am From the Dead End

I Am From the Dead End

A Poem by Murphy
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I entered this on Protagonize.com, and it's one of my favorite works to date.

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I am from the Nothing good,

Move away? I think I should.

Life will live, death will die.

Simple Things and Living a Lie.

I hail from the Smallest Town

Where No one is allowed to Frown.

Why should I be Part of the Game?

Everyone's face must be the Same.

Routine motion, living on rails,

Only wishing I had some Sails.

© 2010 Murphy


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absolutly love this. the phrase I am from the Noting Good gives me goose bumps. very powerful wording.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice. This flows very well. I enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hello friend, you do write well. I suggest you have a look at this message. I genuinely think you can submit something to us, as an encouragement to your good writing.

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The second issue of Golden Apple is now open to submissions. It will be solely based on Christmas and New Year. Poems, short stories (not more than 1200 words), sketches, song lyrics and flash fiction on the proposed theme of Christmas and New Year are most welcome. We want to create some real magic for this year’s December and are working hard on the best possible way to present our contributors’ writings for this issue.

Do have a look at our general guidelines before you submit anything:

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/submissions.html

Do enjoy the first issue as well:

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/golden-apple-issue-1-october-2010.html

Regards,
Golden Apple Team

Posted 13 Years Ago


My favorite line: "Routine motion, living on rails". This is the exercise of the mundane monotony we all face daily when dealing with social requirements. Well put.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. a song of freedom ... freedom from conforming ... a song of wisdom ... and maybe even reforming ...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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