Path

What iam doing,what i want to do,how i will do-try to answer these questions fo myself

To achieve what I want,
should I plan my own path
or should i follow what others have done,what is their path?

Should I FOLLow the steps taken by others,
or should take steps on my own?
Should I be a follower always or
should I desire to be known?

Should I walk along the path or
should be running towards the goal?
Few will say path,most will say run,
achieving your dream is what matters afterall

if you run after others,
you will reach their destiny,
be strong,you might have troubles
but trust me solutions are many

let others follow you
let them choose the path,you have built,
for this you will have to work hard,be sleepless today
tommorow you should not have any guilt

if you do sleepless efforts,only then
they will know you......otherwise...
Enjoy being a part of crowd,you are just like other..
Theres nothing new

Author's Note

Suggestions are requested and invited

Reviews

[Deepak Sharma]

Thanx mam@confuser,
i will surely improve my grammer mam@jyoti swami

[Confuser]

Deepak: The questions you ask are necessary to achieve happiness in life. They are profound and without goals, and the ability to resist pressure from others is in my opinion necessary to achieve a worthy life. To lead or follow...I think the poem is very good, and also think it is always important to be unique. To find yourself. Doesn't matter is people follow, only that a person contributes in a good way to humanity. I tell my son, do well in school, but more important in life is kindness and empathy. Well done. Thank you. Dale

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

The attempt at making Sonnets is good, but I felt that grammar as well as framing would surely need some work. It seems like a draft, raw and yet to be edited. Otherwise, the idea is nice..! Good Luck!

[Deepak Sharma]

Thanx alot mam.
What a splendid review

[Maja]

Corrections/ Suggestions:

or should [I] take steps on my own?
Should I be a follower always or
should I desire to be known?

Should I walk along the path or
should [I] be running towards the goal?
Few will say path,most will say run,
achieving your dream is what matters after [all]

let others follow you
let them choose the path [] you have built,

if you do sleepless efforts,only then
they will know you......otherwise...
Enjoy being a part of crowd,you are just like [the others]..
There [is] nothing new

I like the thought that went into this poem. Self-reflection IS a necessary part of life, because one way or another we're going to have to choose the path we're going to take.