Lying.

It's time to let it go, 
And say my last goodbyes, 
Cannot let these feeling show, 
What i hide deepest inside... 
I wish and i forget, 
How to breath when i'm alone, 
Yet my wish was not this loneliness, 
But rather something to call my own...

Author's Note

Created from a character's point of view, after her relationship fell to ruins, leaving her abandoned by her lover, and her children confused and without their father.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CSU2KF6q42I ( - It was originally meant to go with this piece of music, which a section of a music-box version of the song 'Lying' by Panic! At The Disco. )

Again, i created this a months ago, so I'm not sure if i'd call it new as such.. But, for my poetry, it is reasonably new.
I was curious as to what people might think of this, and I'm also choosing older works to posts, to see what newer works i should post more of in the future.

Reviews

[angelica]

this is really awesome. i can fell my heartache accepting that i have to move on, but i just cant let go

[My-two-lives]

Thank you very much, i'm glad that it managed to convey those feelings! Thanks again.