My Heart Has A Secret

For Longing Loves

 

 

My Heart Has A Secret

 

My heart has a secret....

But my lips won't speek a word.

That my heart beats faster when I

see you near.

 

My heart has a secret....

I won't let it tell.

That my arms, are longing for you.

 

My heart has a secret....

My eyes glow whenever your in

my sight.

 

But you never notice.

No you just can't see.

So, I keep that secret, my heart

is keeping for me.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Very sweetly written and a concept of something we can relate to. Having those moment which we long and desire another so deeply. But they never seem to know we exist. I love the fact as I read this I felt as if someone was softly whispering this in my ear. Feeling the power of a presence with in the words themselves.


Great Job!!!!!!!

[Foxtrot206]

I REALLY like this one. Again, just a few minor errors ("your" is possessive.......you actually needed "you're," the contraction of "you are.") But I like this one a lot. My favorite of yours so far.

[The DuchessPoet]

Thank you, my friend, for entering your talent into my contest!

[Adeline]

this is really good and has a deeper meaning for me since I feel like that about someone, actually my friend plans on telling him cause she thinks he feels the same way, but I don't know why I'm telling you this, I like your poem! :)

[Confessions Of An Angry..]

Aww...

[Titus McGuire]

Very well written, I like the flow of the words and the innocence portrayed. It reminds me of those feelings I had when I was a teenager and would have a crush on someone but could never get up the courage to tell them. Bravi.

[Thename]

Wow it's great to know everyone here has experienced that . Summed up very nicely about how I feel .

[Jerri]

Ahh...well written, I have been there done that~

[emmajoy]

You write such tender and delightful poems, fine metre and smooth flow almost 100%

Thank you again for sharing

[octane143]

unspoken hidden love, we've all been there