Where is Your Heart?

Word is, all is fair in love and war

When the wheels turn, I'm not sure

If our love is fouled

Who's up for rebound?

What pick will you make?

What road will you take?

Let me see your sleeves

 I, know your body

Any honor among thieves?

 I, trust no body

Getting older, you can't divide time

Get it twogether , only one other in your prime

This is the bed I lie in

How should I make it?

Folded and alone, I sleep naked

Missing you

We have differences

We have distances

People and places, few and far between

You're not the same, if you don't know what I mean

And its all my fault 

Incorrect and arrogant 

Who will hold you heart, a surrogate?

Author's Note

UNFINISHED PLEASE COMMENT, NOVICE POET

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Very nice. I can feel the emotion in this piece. The longing, the regret, the worry for the future. Heartbreak can be a terrible thing.

[Diona Sixpence]

great job...i love it...please finish it up

[kingblaq]

The emotion is carrying. The flow n rhyming are rhythmic! You are talented... WRITE ON!

[sonnie ibadah]

this is bold and strong but yet, there's a longing side to it. great work!

[ayele marie dalmeida]

this is very moving . nicely written. please do finish it :)

[Raymond Federle]

Very nice. Rhythm and rhyme flow nicely and smoothly with emotion and feeling. Excellent work.

[Tsali Tha Athána..]

I enjoyed this piece. good work