Suffocating on the Human Condition

Suffocating on the Human Condition

A Poem by MyOpenThirdEye
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I love the ideas that I put into this

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The intoxication of life
can often cloud our minds
blind us to our faults
and lead to our own undoing

Everyone is choking on air
because it is too clean
and the human mind
is very, very dirty

Suffocating on air
Breathing in water
drowning in thoughts
consuming Ideas

Don't choke baby
breath in the smoke
remember it babe
It's your only hope

Die deaths that aren't our own
Sit here and write this poem
Greed is mans worst enemy
yet his most dependable trait

Suffocating on air
Breathing in water
drowning in thoughts
consuming Ideas

© 2014 MyOpenThirdEye


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"Suffocating on air
Breathing in water
drowning in thoughts
consuming Ideas"


Posted 10 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 3, 2014
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MyOpenThirdEye
MyOpenThirdEye

New York City, NJ



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I'm getting back into writing after not really writing much in at least 2 years. Got over a lot of addictions, and now that I'm sober and healthy its time to get back to exercising the mind, and get i.. more..

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