Beautiful

Beautiful.
Look.
It’s over there.

I point
To show you.
Because you don’t seem to see.

Now I laugh.
You really don’t see.

I shake my head
Side to side
And I say.

You must close your eyes.

You must breathe.

You must Listen.

You must Love
If only for just…
For just because

Here.
I sit alone sometimes.
On this stone
And watch.

First with my eyes.
But…

Then I watch, I follow
With everything else

Then I feel

Then I move to a certain place.
Where only I can be.

That is here. Still. And it is quiet.
Like it should be.

Now you can see it.
I know.
Beautiful.

Reviews

[soniix]

i like your style of writing in this .. the detail, definition and description.. :P
... keep it up..

[Kacy]

Wow.
Thats a really brilliant poem. I like the sentiment and the layout, I particularly like the final verse, the last two lines are extremely powerful. Great work.

[Cherrie Palmer]

there is beauty in teaching someone to see