Broken Up Over Nothing

If I lost our memories

If they disappear

Would there be any evidence

That you were ever here

 

And if I cry

Would you hear the sound

Of me calling your name

Would you be around

 

And up to this day

I fight my pain

Of my broken heart

Screaming your name

 

But On the outside

A smile on my face

I'm not even fazed

By the blond you hold by the waist

 

While on the inside

I want to die

I want to fall apart

I wanna burn all our memories

Except the scar on my heart 

Author's Note

THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE BEGINNING OF A SONG I'M WRITING

Reviews

[Katie]

i can really feel the pain and hurt in this piece. I also like how you started it, questioning if the pain would be there if you couldnt remember why you were hurting.

[MysteryPoet]

To, The Girl With The Smile: Thank you
To, Robert Nicholls: I'll try my best
To, Sophie: See you tomorrow
And to all of you: I'm posting the introduction of a new Romance Novel

[The Girl with the smile]

This is great!! This poem depicts the pain of a heartbreak flawlessly. I love the last two lines. Nice write!!

[Robert Nicholls]

Sounds like a pretty good intro for a sad song. You should publish the rest of your lyrics if you get the chance!

[Sophie]

hey so i know u!!! u do realize ur supposed to say ur name? But anyway, I've always loved this poem so that doesn't change on here :P