Who Have I Become

Loneliness is my existence.

Pain is my emotion.

Fear is my friend.

Who have I become?

All I never wanted to be.

Darkness is my surrounding.

Frigid is what I feel.

Anxious is my being.

Who have I become?

All I never wanted to be.

Fragile are my in sides.

Rugged is my shell.

Rough are my edges.

Who have I become?

All I never wanted to be.

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

My bottom lip is sticking out. I'm making a sad face ... I feel for the poem,
because the road to hell is pathed with 'good intentions'
We all want to be and do and go....but it takes that first step in the right direction.
We 'become' over a period of bad habits and mistakes.......

[closed]

And so we search. Quest for that part of us which we lost. Sometimes we lose that part of us forever. Others we become more than we ever were before.


tragic genius.

well written.

-Dream

[T]

Mysty, what I enjoy about you as a writer is the way you can express your emotions which allows me to feel your words ... Very heartfelt and wonderfully written as all your poems are ... hugs

[Staci Brown]

many of us will relate to this piece from spending time in the same emotions... but YOU have the power to change all of this hon :D you're stronger than you may realize :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[The Mad Prophet]

Awsome, reminds me of my poem Whats Left of my Shell. I like this one, and I can relate to it. Very well done, very nicely expressed.