My Dearest Lover

My Dearest Lover

 

I have thought of you

            Each moment

                        Of each day

 

I have needed you

            Every moment

                        Of those days

 

Since we parted

 

It feels so good to set eyes on you again

So much I should say

 

Your smell

            Rejuvenates my spirit

 

Your hands

            Comfort my heart

 

Your eyes

See through my walls

 

Your soul

            Illuminates my darkness

 

Forgive me for not holding on

Holding on to you

With every ounce of my existence

Take me as I am

With all my faults

 

Know that I Love You

With every part of my being

Even if my being is imperfect

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[Jenny Davis]

This is such a beautiful, yet sad piece. I feel so alone and racked with regret while reading this...as I believe that is what this poem intended. It's like the old saying, "Don't know what you got till it's gone," however you have put your own personal feelings and vulnerability out here on the page...An EXTREMELY good poem, my friend :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is some very deep heart felt words of love and passion

Your smell
Rejuvenates my spirit

Your hands
Comfort my heart

Your eyes
See through my walls

Your soul
Illuminates my darkness

Man those lines right there really did it for me... beautiful beautiful work.

[LadyLove]

What comes from the heart is the most beautiful of all we have to give to another. Imperfect or not, love that we express will always be equal in its beauty; What matters most is what the one loved will feel when they receive it...that is the true measure of what greatness is. Bless your heart for feeling the way you do for another living soul in his own imperfect ways as well. Take care!

[T]

I agree with Kim, love just oozes out of your poem, Mysty. We aren't perfect and you know when someone loves you deeply, he looks past your faults and just loves you for the woman you are ... Beautifully penned sweetie ... hugs

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Love this, love just oozes out of these words, I can pick a line or two to show which I think were perfect when the whole write is.

Great job.