Words

Words

A Poem by NJ Schneider
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I'm good with words

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I'm good with words
What does that mean
Do I show my soul
When I describe a scene

I use these words
To show how I feel
Can you see me
Through this wall of steel

I'm sick of words
Only mine ring true
When everyone lies
How do I see you

I'm good with words
What does it mean
When I paint a picture 
Does it make me obscene

I use these words
To show how I feel
When you can only see
In the light I steal

I'm sick of words
They're a liars game
Those who play
Are never the same

© 2011 NJ Schneider


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NJ Schneider
First poem in a while.

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I'm sick of words
Only mine ring true
When everyone lies
How do I see you

....................wonderful writing . The words are so power in your hand while using. Best wishes Niki Badges.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i read ur words and i felt the fear
of u going into a new deal
passed time does feed
hope if u pick right words
for those whom u see

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Words are simultaneously powerful and cheap, and best treated with caution. It all depends where the words come from, the ones we use reflect who we are. Great poem, you should keep them coming.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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NJ Schneider
NJ Schneider

Santa Rosa, CA



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My name is Niki and I'm 25 years old. I'm from a small town in northern California and I'm not really sure if writing is my thing but I've done a lot of writing in the past. I first posted on this s.. more..

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