Combination of the Two

About a night that never happened...

Is it the many empty bottles of wine

and the way the moon shines;

the starry look in your eye,

that I have to kiss you one more time?

Because it is here in this dark green field

I could bend down to kneel,

though it doesnt seem real,

but you broke through my shield.

 

Or is it the smell of rain in May

after a long hazy day,

plus everything you say,

That I am, in fact, blown away?

But oh, how my skin melts,

while Mariah sings for help,

and tenderness is felt

But all doubts are shelved

For this one moment of splendor

Where I can sense our hearts render

Into something worth surrender

Because evil is now slender

Compared to the forces here

Even though Love can sear,

we can hold Love without fear

and no one has to shed a tear.

 

Still, it is the peak of the night!

Your eyes are still bright;

Love is still right,

and the sun is nowhere in sight.

 

But I dont know what it is

That makes me feel uninhibited.

That makes us feel like kids;

Makes us see through the glitz.

But if you want to hear the truth

I say, maybe it is you!

Or a love-drunk night overdue?

Perhaps a combination of the two.

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Just beautiful. Great write.

[PhoeniX]

such insight and imagination. words formed a feeling that could be truly felt through this poem. good read