IMMORTAL!

Story of a aching heart expressed in rhythymic poem.

         IMMORTAL!

You came closer,

You felt me,

You smiled and then hugged me,

I jerked you off,

I cursed you then,

I turned away, and 

Went through another way,

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I came closer,

I sensed you,

I cried and then i hugged you,

You didn't reply,

Coz you couldn't reply,

Was your soul still here,

Or is it just the body,

That seems lifeless and sill,

Which it shouldn't have been.

You were gone and gone to eternity,

And your voice from heaven seems to call me.

Your soul which is immortal,

Could be sensed by me.

And your presence is all which i sense thee,

Your soul has left,

Your heart gone,

But it is your love which is always here.

I miss you, i miss you, i miss you thee,

I want you to be here but you cannot be.

So what if your'e dead,

So what if iam no more,

Our love is immortal and will always be........

Reviews

[Ovi-Odiete]

You capture the thoughts of immortality very well. Immense