Your Touch

The impact of a single loving touch set to poetry.

Your Touch❤️

You touch and I’m left dangling on a string with heart expanding
and I do believe no angling will relieve me of its load
for now I’m captured, snared and raptured by sensations
manufactured on a countdown to a fracture bursting to explode.

Out blast those tingling impacts riding nerves to every synapse telling
knees and legs they might collapse upon this flattened floor.
I’m drenched in breathless breathing that now blinds my
heart perceiving why my lungs and mouth are grieving since
there’s oxygen no more

‘cause your aroma sends me reeling with hypnotic smell careening
into muscle, flesh and bone at rates which can’t be charted
and I would spend forever basking in your breath with everlasting
hope you’d never end my gasping only just now started.

And from this magic moment transfixed, I will find your image
did fix in my mind when Time does insist I have reached my end.
I’ll walk Eternity without the stumbling on legs and feet made
whole from crumbling ‘cause thoughts of you will brace my tumbling
down that breakless bend.

Namyh

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing.
"And from this magic moment transfixed, I will find your image
did fix in my mind when Time does insist I have reached my end.
I’ll walk Eternity without the stumbling on legs and feet made
whole from crumbling ‘cause thoughts of you will brace my tumbling
down that breakless bend."
The above lines. So good. Complete poem left me with a hopeful feel. Thank you Namyh for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Namyh]

CoyoteP - This came from a simple touch by someone very dear and I wanted to see if that single act could be translated into poetry, and this was the result. To impart a feeling of 'hopefulness' from this work to a kindred poet is a silver star with cluster pinned to my thoughts and I'll polish it everyday. Now you got me feeling Coyote Proud that I wrote it CP. Hang in there and thanks. Namyh

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you re welcome.

[Bear]

Nice articulation, it is plain to see you have a relationship with words and thus have been a poet for many years. Good word usage igniting strong imagery with long lasting impressions, masterfully done Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Scerina Elizabeth]

WOW!!! LOVED THIS POEM!!!! It is so in depth...

So deep...

SO beautifully written :)

[Namyh]

Scerina - The kicker is that when it’s the first touch or even the last one, each can be magical. These are moments we tend to not forget and if we do usually something comes along to remind us we did, like maybe a poem. Thanks Scerina for stopping in and enjoying and for being captured by it. So glad you loved it too and thanks for that WOW. Kinda makes the day. Namyh

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Your very welcome one - you have a way with words...

You are truly talented :)

[AnonymouslyPerfect]

I loved this poem. You could feel the emotions with each and every line. The use of vocabulary and emotion draws the reader in and makes them want to read more. This is a wonderful poem all together good job!
~AnonymouslyPerfect~

[Namyh]

Anonymously Perfect - No greater tribute is given a poet than when a created work makes a kindred poet "feel the emotions with each and every line". I may be getting that 'anonymous' feeling on my left side but it's well balanced by that 'perfect' feeling all over my right. LOL. Hallelujah! Thanks for brightening my day AP. Namyh