Elemental Series 2 of 4- Wind

Elemental Series 2 of 4- Wind

A Poem by Nankoto
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Second part of my elemental series.

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Torrents of wind

Run like blades

Along your skin

Slashing at flesh

With blades invisible

Leaving no marks

For the winds

They howl like

A beast in

A neverending twilight

Yet you push

Through my eternal

Wind 

© 2008 Nankoto


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I loved this poem. It's... primal. Powerful. Instinctive, something that you don't see just anywhere. Something about it just grabbed me and took me somewhere else for a second. Very good. Please continue the Elemental Series, I love the two you've done so far.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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