First Time is The Scarriest

Kinda sitting here talking to people, then a beat formed in my head, then the words came and before i knew what was happening, I had a poem.

Hold up
Slow down
Take it easy now kid
Don't get ahead of yourself
Let things happen as they do
And you will be just fine
Don't worry so much
Just watch and listen
Learn how it is done
Take it one step at a time
Always keeping one watchful eye open
Making sure not to miss a beatiful moment
Once your past this first step
The rest will be easy
Sit back
Relax
And let the moment take its course
Try not to be scared
This was meant to happen
Don't be scared
You'll do just fine
Nothing will go wrong
It will be just right
So look up to the stars
And know that this was your destiny

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

Fantastic. :]

"Don't be scared
You'll do just fine
Nothing will go wrong
It will be just right
So look up to the stars
And know that this was your destiny"

I enjoyed the feeling of peace in the poem, which is something I have been low on lately, and reading this really calmed me down.
Thanks! :]

[Last Lying Look]

This is amazing.
It keeps me engaged the whole way through because I am wondering what the character is doing.
Excellent work.
Beautiful.
-Elissa