I will love you like I've never been broken

I will love you like I've never been broken

A Poem by Music_Save_Me_From_This

Everyone has been hurt before, but some people you cant tell others you can see it in their eyes 
Like if I ever get the courage to tell him how I feel and he feels the same
I will give him all my love, I've been broken down for a long time and sadly he's my only hope
of getting fixed up 
Being broken for so long has mead me pretend to be happy so people dont think I'm a attention seeker
Being strong is what kept me from breaking down completely
I need someone to love and  fix all the cracks
He is just perfect for that but how do I tell him
No, no, no I cant tell him
But if he does like me the way I like him
I will say in my mind
"I will love like I've never been broken"
And I will keep my word

© 2014 Music_Save_Me_From_This


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This was a good poem. You might want to check your structuring in the first couple lines because it's a little wordy, long lines= messed up flow.

I get where you're coming from though. But know that no one can fix up the cracks except for you. But once you do, your heart will be ready for the love you need :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was a good poem. You might want to check your structuring in the first couple lines because it's a little wordy, long lines= messed up flow.

I get where you're coming from though. But know that no one can fix up the cracks except for you. But once you do, your heart will be ready for the love you need :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i love anime i love to draw i love to write nd im very caring towards others but dont take my kindness for granite i love music more..

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