In the shadows

From the shadow I watch
you fall for another man
From the shadows I watch
Him hold you close
From the shadows
I call your name
From the shadows
I see my love go
From the shadows
I see my light die
From the shadows
Confined to the shadows
I will always be
Lost to her who I long to be

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

I gues that you are a youngster as this reminds me of some of my MUCH earlier writings...I Like the last line, it brings the heartache all together..Keep writing

[Alex]

Thanks for taking time to read it. Very new to writing, but enjoy doing it, just need pointers to keep me going in the right direction!

[Dr. Wood ?]

If you love doing it,,just point yourself and get on with it,,,It becomes easier as you get older...but NEVER try too hard to be creative..let it come naturally, and always carry a pad and pen

[Alex]

Thanks for the advice, the words just come out and when I try to fix them or change bits I find it never flows as it originally did. I suppose it's just practise :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

sure is...good luck