demon of your soul

I look in the mirror confessing all my sins, when I suddenly hear a din from within, looking around I finally found its my demons hiding under the skin.
I can feel the devil's grin.
The devil that resides within everyone and annihilating this devil is an art of a
pure heart.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I like the loosely crafted rhyming (sins, within, skin, grin) . . . I like & relate to your message, but I wish you would take it deeper & more detailed. This is like a tiny taste of pure honesty leaving us wanting more.

[PenguinEmpiress]

This is so beautiful~ it's simple but flows really well. This is well written! well done!

[Katt Knipp]

we all have those secrets we lock deep in side, this just reminds us that everyone has them but that doesn't mean we are evil. great job