I Did Something Right

I Did Something Right

A Poem by Marcello1013

This poem serves as a reminder that no matter where life takes me or how difficult things may get I can always find peace in heart knowing I did something right.

I Did Something Right
Writings by Marcello

For my loving daughter Mia Alivia...

How did something so wrong
Create something so right
In this world full of darkness
She's my shining light

A sign of hope
In distant sight
Reinforcing the fact
This life's worth the fight

As I sit here and write
Thoughts escape into flight
She fills me with joy
Overcome with delight

Yet doubt overcomes me
Keeps me up late at night
That Im doing things wrong
I dont feel quite right

I need to be better
Try with all my might
But I'll never live up
Can't reach that height

Am I just all talk?
All bark n no bite
My head starts its worry
My chest's feeling tight

Then I'm awakened
Dawn takes over night
A revelation
A new outlook ignites

If I am not worthy
If my game isn't tight
How can it be
That her star shines so bright

Couldn't be prouder
Smart kind and polite
To say she is beautiful
Comes up weighing light

That word doesn't begin
To explain what she's inside
God's greatest creation
My salvation guide

Her mark on this world
Will not be denied
A perfect angel
Peace fills me inside

There's no one as special
You can search far and wide
You would find no soul as pure
Despite how hard you tried

So God please protect her
Through life's bumpy ride
Unleash her potential
Allow her greatness to shine

© 2018 Marcello1013

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Beautiful poem, such a sweet love you have for your daughter, it's very special, thank you for sharing

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Added on December 3, 2018
Last Updated on December 3, 2018
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