God Bless [U.S.]

God Bless [U.S.]

A Poem by The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
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I'm probably gonna get a lot of review BS thrown at me, but f**k it. Reviews would be nice for once... lol

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You don't have to worry bout the wars,

Just keep photogenic!

Look good, look sexy,

Wonder: "O M G, when is that hottie gonna text me."

You don't have to think about the young kids who don't make it past 3,

Run right over by the military.

 

Let them worry about their own republics!

You just worry about getting all the hot chicks!

Throw the money at them while they're getting topless,

Just like we did to Bush while he was on that 9/11 topic.

 

You don't have to worry about terrorism,

Read up on Britney Spears!

Pay attention to how her stardom is probably in it's ending years!

Look at her cry tears!

Look at her drink beers!

Flip the channel, another reality show that stereo-types the lives here...

 

Listen to the propaganda let off by the media,

You don't gotta worry about honor suicidalist buying tickets on expedia!

 

Just look up sleazy pics of Paris Hilton in her bra.

Shrug it off!

You don't have to worry about flu epidemics or bad coughs;

The spread of disease, the history of violence.

No need to think about the cease of existance!

 

We're persistant, we'll thrive through any weather.

There are millions of targets to make the [U.S.] feel better!

 

<-----Now I'm not saying that I'm hating on our freedom,

But maybe I should-

Cause our liberation...

Was based on other nations slaving!

But my voice will be lost again,

Pulled into societies blend...---->

 

We just GOT to be the trade king.

Let them be dependent on [U.S.],

Use that Christianity speech; "In God We Trust."

So give us all your money cause God's with [U.S.]

 

Isn't that what is depicted?

Follow this path or be evicted!

Live in this world of pretend,

Where if you have lots of green, we can be best friends! =)

 

Your poverty is enough to prove that we were meant to live, and you were to turn to DUST.

We don't need it, but we want it, that's the difference between [U.S.]

So get out of our way before your skulls crushed!

We need more Dunkin Doughnuts and StarBucks!

So that means the environment is S**T OUTTA LUCK.

 

It's conquest...

And we will never give up this contest.

Welcome to the Project!

It will be a success!

Follow us and we'll build ontop of the mistakes and regrets!

Burn it and live on,

Let bygones be bygones...

 

So other countries; you should embrace [U.S.]

We are just!

We will protect you if you are willing to DIE for [U.S.]

But at the same time, you'll do [U.S.] dirty favors on the down low...

And if you betray [U.S.], we will nuke you senseless,

But that's AFTER we leave you penniless.

 

[U.S.]

That's all there is, forget about them,

This is how we live.

 

 

© 2008 The Lovely Sound Of Crashing


Author's Note

The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
If you're gonna argue with my views or whatever, feel free too. Just don't be a douche about it.

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Thanks for the request!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I agree with you 100% and great job on this piece. Keep it up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not too bad, my friend. I've see the Dumbness that's spreading around nowadays and it does piss me off and it's the reason why I solely go to independant web-sites for my news--they either distort the facts or put up stories about Paris Hilton and their ilk which I couldn't give two tugs of a dead dog's dick about.

There are some grammar things I noticed, which I'll point out in my notes, but other then that, pretty good little piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much, so quick. I think i'll clink..clink..clink.. read the funnies in the newspaper. Then the paper gets tossed into the garbage bin, forgeting about the headlines, forgetting about the recycling bin, next to the trash. Oh that reciepe sounds good!, i think i'll hit up the vending machine, that should be good.
So true that people see what society has trained them to view. They don't even notice the world slipping into hell around them.
I agree with you that this is the current state of things.
Yet, i believe we as a people could change it. If the masses wanted to, or saw that the grass was greener, by getting smarter and more compassionate.
Great Write. I shall shelve this one for re-reading later. It's very inspirational!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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