Being Comparable To Feces Never Felt So Good!

Splitting oceans with motions,
After bringing a plague!
I'm deeper than stab wounds from a foot long blade.
No, I'm deeper than men in love, who don't do it just to get laid.
My words are meant to teach and entertain,
Yet they can show tragedy like a Shakespearean play!
That Asian psycho sound like Dir En Grey!
I wasn't born a slave,
I was born as a soldier with a tongue sharp as a glaive!
I make Devil's Cry, like Dante's Aerial Rave!
You all move slow-mo like Bay Watch Babes!
I'm a Spartan, with a mix of freshness like Martin!
Tell me "wussup!", before I roshambo you like Cartman!
Either that or have your image printed on the milk carton!
I'm like Vishnu, a supreme being!
Slashing down non-believers like Dark-Aged Europeans!
Satan on the mic, I bathe in fire,
And come with the forces of a dark empire!
You can catch my balls like an umpire!
But they're too heavy for you to hold like monster truck tires!
I'm clipping your fences apart like sharp pliers,
And sticking my name up like concert fliers!
Hotter than clothes straight out the dryer,
I'm a hot sausage, you are all just Oscar Mayer's!
I got an incredible touch,
Paint vividly like a renaissance artist with a brush!
You couldn't understand real love, you still on lusting for your crush!
You still in school, fool!
Not even lukewarm, colder than pissin' in a pool!
Grow up to that real man s**t!
And then maybe you can one day feel the responsibility of leadership,
After the teen to adult shift.
But until then, know where we are split.
You are the crap of rap, and I am DA S**T.

Reviews

[Jazlean]

"I got an incredible touch,
Paint vividly like a renaissance artist with a brush! "

you sure do you know! ^_^

another great piece, not my fav but it was enjoyed!!
I now have a sudden urge to use the line
"You are the crap of rap, and I am DA S**T. " (awesome strong ending!)

:P

well done! keep fighting, keep writing and weaving great similies and metaphors in your work.
~Jaz

[Wolfwind Words]

Vividly to the point! Wow! I...thinking that i'd like to see this one on MTV! :)

Great flow to this Rap mocking lines.

Great Work!

[Andrea A. Wentz]

Ouch! Who the heck pissed you off?

I liked how this flowed, most definately could go for rap. I like how you tied the beginning concept into the end while letting the piece take you where it may in the middle. Very enjoyable work! :D