Who are defeated ones!!

Who are defeated ones!!

A Poem by Neel

She asked

        me yesterday
        who defeated ones are!!


My answer was:


One, who has never tried, is defeated one!!

One, who have quit halfway of journey, is defeated one!!

One, who has never believed in their abilities, is defeated one!!

One, who has always played on safer side, is the defeated one!!

One, who has never explored the beauty of life, is defeated one!!

One, who has never believed in the beauty of their dreams, is defeated one!!

One, who has never experienced other side of life, is defeated one!!

One, who has never tested failure, is the defeated one!!

One, who has never challenged impossible, is defeated one!!

One, who has never asked questions, is defeated one!!

One, who has never broken the rule to define a new one, is defeated one!!

One, who has never suffered, is defeated one!!

One, who always stands still and expects success to come in easy way, is defeated one!!

One, who believes in smart work, not in hard work, is defeated one!!

© 2013 Neel


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is true you are defeated already if you don't make an attempt to live life and just let it pass you by,Great piece!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neel

10 Years Ago

Thanks Vidya for appreciating... :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

137 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on December 17, 2013
Last Updated on December 17, 2013
Tags: Poem, defeat

Author

Neel
Neel

Writing
It’s new It’s new

A Poem by Neel


Dear God Dear God

A Poem by Neel